Monday, October 15, 2012

Authors note: This is my personal narrative.

Prince Fielders Bowling Benefit

My grandma, Irene Bolton, works at the brewers stadium and is a very important worker.  She has been there for over 30 years and now runs the Brewers Buddies Program and Season Ticket Holder Luncheon.  She meet a lot of the old and new. She met Bob Ucker and got to go to his house with some other workers and had dinner and I think that’s pretty cool.  He also made a tribute to my grandpa when he died during a game.

There was an event that Prince Fielder made where they bowled and raised money for youth sports. My grandma bowled with some workers and the brewers, I got to go as her guest and when I found out I could go I was very excited. I brought my camera and so I could take pictures with them.  We were in the VIP section!  I met Prince Fielder, Ryan Braun, Cameron Loul, Ryan Braun, Jonathan Lucroy and many more.  I got pictures with all of them and I got to hang out with them for awhile too.  It was an awesome time.

 I am a big fan of the Milwaukee Brewers and this is just one of the many things I have experienced having a grandma that works for the Brewers. 


                          By . Tommie Redmond

3 comments:

  1. You repeated Ryan Brauns Name.

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  2. It was good but there are some grammar issues so correcting it would be good next time.

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  3. I think you could have put something more into this like maybe one thing that happened that stood out while you were out bowling with the brewers.

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