Patriot`s Pen

I am very happy that we have freedom and we are because of our soldiers. They have fought for us for a very long time and I am grateful that they have been keeping us safe. They put their own life at risk to save ours and that is a nice and good thing to do.

I feel like we should have more days were we can thank them for all they have done for us and still doing. For all of the solders and patriots who have passed away and still living I thank you dearly, it means a lot to me that I know I can be safe from people that you fight to keep us out of harm’s way. I respect all of the patriots that are still with us and are fighting for us right now.

I had a grandpa and an uncle and a cousin that went into the war and fought for our country. My Grandpa always tells me story`s about him in the Vietnam. I have always looked up to him as a hero and as a grandfather, I also look up to everyone and hope maybe someday I can do something that god for people to thank me and look up to me like I do for all the veterans. When I was in 5^th grade for veterans day my grandpa came in and I thought it was really cool.

I thank the people who fought for our country and I am happy that I am in such a great place for the land of the free, and the home of the brave.

  

Authors note: this is my new conflict/ resolution 

The Greatest

Conflict

Muhammad Ali was a small kid growing up, some kids bullied him because he was small but he also had a lot of bigger friends that stuck up for him. But Muhammad go sick of all of it and wanted to stick up for himself. Muhammad got a new bike when he was 12 years old and somebody stole it. He was poor growing up and that  bike meant a lot to him. He was very mad and told the his friend that he was going to beat up whoever took it.

Resolution  

He was so mad that he just wouldn’t stop working out and he got a trainer to help him because he didn’t know a lot of the stuff that he was doing. He went to the gym almost every day and after a couple of months he started seeing nice results and he also did boxing while he was at the gym, so now he could fight and he was ripped and not so many kids messed with him anymore. 

Tiki and Ronde barber

Cause

As kids tiki and ronde loved to play football and they were very good at it. They were the stars of the team and those two scored all the teams touchdowns.  But their grades were falling and they couldn’t play anymore in the big game.

Effect

Since they weren’t there they lost the game and a lot of the teammates were very upset with them. If I could change one thing in the story I would of wanted them to of kept up with their homework so they could`ve played.

Authors note: This is my personal narrative.

Prince Fielders Bowling Benefit

My grandma, Irene Bolton, works at the brewers stadium and is a very important worker.  She has been there for over 30 years and now runs the Brewers Buddies Program and Season Ticket Holder Luncheon.  She meet a lot of the old and new. She met Bob Ucker and got to go to his house with some other workers and had dinner and I think that’s pretty cool.  He also made a tribute to my grandpa when he died during a game.

There was an event that Prince Fielder made where they bowled and raised money for youth sports. My grandma bowled with some workers and the brewers, I got to go as her guest and when I found out I could go I was very excited. I brought my camera and so I could take pictures with them.  We were in the VIP section!  I met Prince Fielder, Ryan Braun, Cameron Loul, Ryan Braun, Jonathan Lucroy and many more.  I got pictures with all of them and I got to hang out with them for awhile too.  It was an awesome time.

 I am a big fan of the Milwaukee Brewers and this is just one of the many things I have experienced having a grandma that works for the Brewers. 


                          By . Tommie Redmond

Authors note: This is my conflict/resolution  about the book SLAM!

SLAM!

Conflict

The book I read is called SLAM! Its about a teenage high school boy who loves basketball. He dedicates almost all of his time to play it, and that’s the problem. He doesn’t do his homework and if failing a lot of his classes. It’s the end of the year and everything is well until the principal came up to him and told him he is going to fail the 10^th grade unless he takes summer school and he wont be able to play next year if he gets held back.

Resolution 

He finally realized that he needs to step it up and cut out time of playing basketball and more time doing homework and that’s what he did. He past the 10^th grade and is doing much better in basketball and in school.